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PostSubject: Numb   22.06.11 9:48

Shitty poem I wrote...


This numb feeling is taking over,
Slowly creeping through my body.
Starting in the heart,
Finding its way down.

If I am supposed to be feeling sorrow,
Where is it?
Distracting myself seems to work,
But that dull ache is still there.
That ever-present pain,
Gripping tightly to my heart.
No matter what I do, no matter how hard I try,
That feeling is still there.

Is this self-induced?
I can’t seem to tell.
After all,
You’re the one who did this to me.
Even so,
This feeling of nothing continues its sweep.

Sooner or later,
I won’t be able to feel anything.
Whether that is a good or a bad thing…
I can’t seem to tell.

I don't care about what happens to you // But maybe I need you

I will destroy you, if it is the last thing I do // You've worked too hard to have your happiness destroyed
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PostSubject: Re: Numb   29.06.11 21:11

I don't think it's shitty, Capri. I believe we all feel something like this at some point in or throughout our lives.

Last edited by Saiteiru on 29.06.11 21:13; edited 1 time in total
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PostSubject: Re: Numb   29.06.11 21:12

I actually thought it was really damn good... just didn't want to say something depressing XP

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