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PostSubject: A Poem   31.08.10 15:08

You

Your voice is like a gentle breeze
Whose kind tones bring me to my knees.
Your face is the greatest art
Which sparked my once silent heart.
What was once small, feeble, and quiet
Is now strong and beating with might.
For now our hearts aren't yours or mine
And with a great feeling that's so divine
Our hearts are one and together
With our love lasting forever.




I like nonsense, it wakes up the brain cells. Fantasy is a necessary ingredient in living, it's a way of looking at life through the wrong end of a telescope. Which is what I do, and that enables you to laugh at life's realities.


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PostSubject: Re: A Poem   31.08.10 20:35

*intently staring at screen and reads*..........*done* That was beautiful Tim! :Dx87 *glomps best* you are awesome at this ^_^


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PostSubject: Re: A Poem   01.09.10 22:41

I gladly take the blame for this, but give all the credit to Best... awesome work dude ^_^


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PostSubject: Re: A Poem   02.09.10 12:29

Best, your a sap.
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PostSubject: Re: A Poem   02.09.10 15:16

And your art is crap Razz
Can't you tell? I can rhyme all day!
Probably because I'm partially gay Razz

(Obviously a joke Wink )




I like nonsense, it wakes up the brain cells. Fantasy is a necessary ingredient in living, it's a way of looking at life through the wrong end of a telescope. Which is what I do, and that enables you to laugh at life's realities.


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PostSubject: Re: A Poem   02.09.10 15:21

Her art is NOT crap! >Sad


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PostSubject: Re: A Poem   02.09.10 15:25

I can rhyme too,
It's not only you,
This line is true,
Keep on trying,
I'll keep on fighting.


"susurrus [soo-sur-uhs]"
- (noun) As one of the most beautiful words in the English language, susurrus is defined as a soft, murmuring sound. It resembles the rustling symphony of the leaves moving across the pavement or the whisper created by the branches of the trees on a windy, autumnday. Uttering susurrus out loud also simulates the acoustics of nature’s effect; this is one of those rare words where its aesthetic, sound and feel coincide beautifully.
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PostSubject: Re: A Poem   02.09.10 20:31

fail...

I speak this way to prove I'm cool,
why can't you rhyme, you stupid fool?

with every word, I pound you down,
striking deeper into the ground.

all in all, rhymes are all the same,
and I must say, they're kind of lame.


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PostSubject: Re: A Poem   02.09.10 20:50

Win...

This is a poem.
Because I am calling it one.

You will hate me because I am not rhyming, being different, and an asshole.
You are right to do so.



Hinaoki wrote:
Thanks for sorting that out for me, sir. You shall now be known under the name of Sir Lord Tarsonis the Necrophiliac Judge.

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Hah. I'm a twat? I bet even a bacterium exhibits more gender traits than you, and is STILL more honorable!

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PostSubject: Re: A Poem   02.09.10 21:12

Poems Suck,
Go fuck a duck,
Yes this rhymes,
All good times.


"susurrus [soo-sur-uhs]"
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PostSubject: Re: A Poem   03.09.10 15:37

Alright, people, please appease,
You all really have to face this up,
'Cause your poems are really just cheese,
And you really need a chocolate cup,
Of shut the fuck up.


Phew.



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PostSubject: Re: A Poem   03.09.10 16:23

I need to stop reading
because my brain is bleeding,
with all the different voice.
When i'm done i'll rejoice,
but i'm not even close.
So with my medicine i'll take an extra dose.
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PostSubject: Re: A Poem   03.09.10 16:27

Haikus are easy
But sometimes they don't make sense.
Refrigerator.



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PostSubject: Re: A Poem   03.09.10 16:39

Hinaoki wrote:
Alright, people, please appease,
You all really have to face this up,
'Cause your poems are really just cheese,
And you really need a chocolate cup,
Of shut the fuck up.


Phew.


one good reason why this fails as a rhyming poem: you need syllables that match, IE:

your poem is fail,
it's low on the scale

notice how each have 5 syllables

(lol, I'm just messing with you Hina)

but I'm being truthful at the same time.


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PostSubject: Re: A Poem   03.09.10 17:21

Damn this thread.
It's messing my head.

That's a poem.

So is this:

My favorite color
is blue

Anyway, SHUT YOUR FUCK UP



Hinaoki wrote:
Thanks for sorting that out for me, sir. You shall now be known under the name of Sir Lord Tarsonis the Necrophiliac Judge.

Nokiemens wrote:
Hah. I'm a twat? I bet even a bacterium exhibits more gender traits than you, and is STILL more honorable!

Terceau wrote:
Even a bacterium exhibits more gender traits than me. I like this.
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