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PostSubject: COMMENTS   19.07.11 6:16

Please put all comments here... I will include a FAQ soon to answer any questions.


The internet is no longer just a land of videos and forums.
I have observed the great idiots of America from all over the internet.
I have lived among the Bronies, Redditers, Furry Clan, Tumblers, and Whovians.
I have watched virtual cities rise and fall, both because of strife, or because of trends.
I have wandered to many great forums across the internet and observed many different places.
I am the Wanderer and I have traveled through the many planes of existence that is the Internet.
I have learned a lot about this world and realize I know nothing about it at all. Thus I will continue to wander.
I am no longer a commander, I am no longer a Queen, I am The Wanderer
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PostSubject: Re: COMMENTS   19.07.11 7:51

What's the point?


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PostSubject: Re: COMMENTS   19.07.11 9:39

US News... yeah no, please don't.

As for the other stuff, overall I'd recommend some humor, actually lots of it. Biasing it is also nice. Instead of saying 'invasion from the Worthbeads Empire' be like 'UNLAWFUL AND UNSCRUPULUS INCURSION BY THE MIND BLOWINGLY STUPID GOAT FUCKER WORTHBEADS' or something like that. When you're trying to make something like this, it needs to be funny.



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PostSubject: Re: COMMENTS   19.07.11 10:05

We don't want another Fox News. We have Fox News for that.


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PostSubject: Re: COMMENTS   19.07.11 12:19

It's called satire.


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PostSubject: Re: COMMENTS   19.07.11 14:10

I thought it was typed well, at least, seemed somewhat realistic when you take into account the fact that this is your first "news" experience.


Now for constructive criticism:

Make it longer.

Have more information.

Typically news cast don't quote themselves.


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PostSubject: Re: COMMENTS   19.07.11 15:34

Ta]R[SoNiS wrote:
US News... yeah no, please don't.

As for the other stuff, overall I'd recommend some humor, actually lots of it. Biasing it is also nice. Instead of saying 'invasion from the Worthbeads Empire' be like 'UNLAWFUL AND UNSCRUPULUS INCURSION BY THE MIND BLOWINGLY STUPID GOAT FUCKER WORTHBEADS' or something like that. When you're trying to make something like this, it needs to be funny.

It's not to be entirely funny, its to state shit that's going down here.

TSDZ_President wrote:
I thought it was typed well, at least, seemed somewhat realistic when you take into account the fact that this is your first "news" experience.


Now for constructive criticism:

Make it longer.

Have more information.

Typically news cast don't quote themselves.

I intend to make it seem almost like a Newspaper soon, but right now I'm just trying to get HOW i'll do it for now, a few more articles may be added Friday


The internet is no longer just a land of videos and forums.
I have observed the great idiots of America from all over the internet.
I have lived among the Bronies, Redditers, Furry Clan, Tumblers, and Whovians.
I have watched virtual cities rise and fall, both because of strife, or because of trends.
I have wandered to many great forums across the internet and observed many different places.
I am the Wanderer and I have traveled through the many planes of existence that is the Internet.
I have learned a lot about this world and realize I know nothing about it at all. Thus I will continue to wander.
I am no longer a commander, I am no longer a Queen, I am The Wanderer
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PostSubject: Re: COMMENTS   22.07.11 5:55

Well if you're trying to state shit that goes down, don't make the realphobia part more cryptic. And really, it's boring unless it's funny.

MAKE IT FUNNY :RAGE:



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PostSubject: Re: COMMENTS   22.07.11 7:25

Yes, this isn't a serious and professional news thing where you get paid.

Make it funny.


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PostSubject: Re: COMMENTS   24.07.11 8:22

I should totally do the financial report.



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PostSubject: Re: COMMENTS   26.07.11 10:56

Oh, you. ._.


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PostSubject: Re: COMMENTS   26.07.11 12:10

I love how you happened to start the interviews the weekend I wasn't home -_-




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PostSubject: Re: COMMENTS   26.07.11 12:53

I am a newscaster, I cum in yours news, I don't give a fuck.
inb4 what


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PostSubject: Re: COMMENTS   26.07.11 13:03

You're an idiot. Just thought you should know that.




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PostSubject: Re: COMMENTS   26.07.11 13:05

but I love you
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"susurrus [soo-sur-uhs]"
- (noun) As one of the most beautiful words in the English language, susurrus is defined as a soft, murmuring sound. It resembles the rustling symphony of the leaves moving across the pavement or the whisper created by the branches of the trees on a windy, autumnday. Uttering susurrus out loud also simulates the acoustics of nature’s effect; this is one of those rare words where its aesthetic, sound and feel coincide beautifully.
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PostSubject: Re: COMMENTS   26.07.11 13:14

But Victoria! We already know he's an idiot! We need to use new insults, or he'll just get used to it!


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PostSubject: Re: COMMENTS   26.07.11 13:20

Yeah, I know.

(That was to both of you by the way.)

And I love you too Nik. Tough love ; )




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PostSubject: Re: COMMENTS   26.07.11 17:08

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"susurrus [soo-sur-uhs]"
- (noun) As one of the most beautiful words in the English language, susurrus is defined as a soft, murmuring sound. It resembles the rustling symphony of the leaves moving across the pavement or the whisper created by the branches of the trees on a windy, autumnday. Uttering susurrus out loud also simulates the acoustics of nature’s effect; this is one of those rare words where its aesthetic, sound and feel coincide beautifully.
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PostSubject: Re: COMMENTS   26.07.11 19:53

Why would you interview your reporters? Razz



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Thanks for sorting that out for me, sir. You shall now be known under the name of Sir Lord Tarsonis the Necrophiliac Judge.

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Hah. I'm a twat? I bet even a bacterium exhibits more gender traits than you, and is STILL more honorable!

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PostSubject: Re: COMMENTS   26.07.11 20:53

they werent reporters when i was interviewing them ;D


The internet is no longer just a land of videos and forums.
I have observed the great idiots of America from all over the internet.
I have lived among the Bronies, Redditers, Furry Clan, Tumblers, and Whovians.
I have watched virtual cities rise and fall, both because of strife, or because of trends.
I have wandered to many great forums across the internet and observed many different places.
I am the Wanderer and I have traveled through the many planes of existence that is the Internet.
I have learned a lot about this world and realize I know nothing about it at all. Thus I will continue to wander.
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PostSubject: Re: COMMENTS   27.07.11 5:35

>w> Sam, you're a dick.


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PostSubject: Re: COMMENTS   27.07.11 16:01

Come on Nokie... Stop...
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PostSubject: Re: COMMENTS   09.08.11 14:56

Updates? Sad

I honestly started to like it.



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Hah. I'm a twat? I bet even a bacterium exhibits more gender traits than you, and is STILL more honorable!

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PostSubject: Re: COMMENTS   09.08.11 15:03

He hasn't been active.
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PostSubject: Re: COMMENTS   09.08.11 15:17

Bullshit, I've seen him on at night.


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